Drabble - Viggo/Sean

[archet]

Title: Out of Control
Author: Archet
Pairing: Viggo/Sean
Rating: R
Summary: Viggo’s done with shouting.
Disclaimer: this is fiction and in no way implies anything as to the real lives to the lovely men who are inspirations for these characters.
Feedback: welcomed and appreciated!



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I follow him, operating on pure instinct, done with shouting.

I call his name, and it’s not until he’s heading down the hallway that I realize how far I’m willing to push it.

I shove him against the wall, arm across his chest, hips grinding him into the paint and plaster.

I ignore his curses, grab his cock through his jeans, massage him mercilessly.

I take his mouth, smothering him, uncaring, because I need this so badly.

I can’t stop, he won’t stop me.

I take what’s mine.

I love him, and this is us, hot, hard, out of control.

Comments

[liars-dance.livejournal.com]

Ooh - this is hot and angry and outofcontrol!Viggo is very sexy... Wonderfully done!

[archet.livejournal.com]

Many thanks! I rather enjoy outofcontro!Viggo! He's a lot of fun, I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

Eee! Your icon...*licks* Loved those pics of Sean at the footie match, so gorgeous...*wibble*

[afra_schatz]

I'm slain. *blinks* Really loved this, especially the last line, sentence structure and shortness so fitting to the content. Amazing.

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm really pleased this came acorss so sharply. That was how it felt it had to be, thanks for reading! ;)

[mooms.livejournal.com]

Very well written and powerful !

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! Glad you liked, ;)

[halszka.livejournal.com]

Very convincing, hot little fic. You wonderfully catch the moment. Great work

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! So glad this moment came acorss clear and vivid for you. Thanks for reading! ;)

[lab-jazz.livejournal.com]

Wonderful...just wonderful...fast paced and hot

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! I'm happy you liked this, ;)

[ribby.livejournal.com]

*murgle* Wow... this is intense, hot and sexy with just the barest edge of something darker. Really nice!

~Kris

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Was hoping that was how it would come across, hot with a bit of an edge. I really like VigBean with a bit of a dark angle, sometimes. I'm going to have to try out something longer one of these days. Thanks for reading! ;)

[helena-s-renn.livejournal.com]

*meep!* go, viggo. that last line is really a killer.

[archet.livejournal.com]

Eee! Thanks! So glad you enjoyed this, little bit edgier Viggo, ;)

[brigantine.livejournal.com]

I like this idea of picking up at what might be the tail end of an argument, and Viggo unwilling to let the two of them walk away from each other angry, and disconnected. Something like this may not solve the initial problem, but it certainly starts the discussion over again from a different angle! Heh!

[archet.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked! I'm not sure where this one came from, and originally it was a little bit rougher, but I get the feeling Sean's being (not surprisingly) stubborn about something, and Vig just couldn't take it anymore. You're right, though, this may not solve the problem, but it'll definitely get Sean's attention. Hee! Thanks for reading, ;)

[elintirn.livejournal.com]

I liked this a lot - short and punchy and to the point sentences, perfectly demonstrating the fact that Viggo's patience has snapped. Viggo's a brave man, but fortune favours the brave in this case I see, thankfully!

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed. Viggo's patience definitely snapped, and I really wanted to reflect just how much. In this case fortune did favor the brave, Vig got what he wanted *g*, and it was truly a combination of him just reacting and taking what would give him satisfaction, and Sean letting him do it. Thanks for reading! ;)

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

"I love him, and this is us..."

Could be out of control, but yet it feels controlled in the end . . .

Lovely writing.

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I think losing control is almost healthy for these two, a way to release frustration and pressure, but underneath there's a very real bond and love they both can count on falling back on. Thanks for reading! ;)

[farothiel.livejournal.com]

This is just perfectly done. I can so imagine Sean walking and Vig following, but not the other way around. Thank you.

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I was going for something a bit different as the time this was written, I'm glad it worked well. Thanks for reading! ;)