Drabble - Viggo/Sean

[archet]

Title: Out of Control
Author: Archet
Pairing: Viggo/Sean
Rating: R
Summary: Viggo’s done with shouting.
Disclaimer: this is fiction and in no way implies anything as to the real lives to the lovely men who are inspirations for these characters.
Feedback: welcomed and appreciated!



~*~


I follow him, operating on pure instinct, done with shouting.

I call his name, and it’s not until he’s heading down the hallway that I realize how far I’m willing to push it.

I shove him against the wall, arm across his chest, hips grinding him into the paint and plaster.

I ignore his curses, grab his cock through his jeans, massage him mercilessly.

I take his mouth, smothering him, uncaring, because I need this so badly.

I can’t stop, he won’t stop me.

I take what’s mine.

I love him, and this is us, hot, hard, out of control.

Comments

[liars-dance.livejournal.com]

Ooh - this is hot and angry and outofcontrol!Viggo is very sexy... Wonderfully done!

[afra_schatz]

I'm slain. *blinks* Really loved this, especially the last line, sentence structure and shortness so fitting to the content. Amazing.

[mooms.livejournal.com]

Very well written and powerful !

[halszka.livejournal.com]

Very convincing, hot little fic. You wonderfully catch the moment. Great work

[lab-jazz.livejournal.com]

Wonderful...just wonderful...fast paced and hot

[ribby.livejournal.com]

*murgle* Wow... this is intense, hot and sexy with just the barest edge of something darker. Really nice!

~Kris

[helena-s-renn.livejournal.com]

*meep!* go, viggo. that last line is really a killer.

[brigantine.livejournal.com]

I like this idea of picking up at what might be the tail end of an argument, and Viggo unwilling to let the two of them walk away from each other angry, and disconnected. Something like this may not solve the initial problem, but it certainly starts the discussion over again from a different angle! Heh!

[elintirn.livejournal.com]

I liked this a lot - short and punchy and to the point sentences, perfectly demonstrating the fact that Viggo's patience has snapped. Viggo's a brave man, but fortune favours the brave in this case I see, thankfully!

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

"I love him, and this is us..."

Could be out of control, but yet it feels controlled in the end . . .

Lovely writing.

[farothiel.livejournal.com]

This is just perfectly done. I can so imagine Sean walking and Vig following, but not the other way around. Thank you.