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Title: Whispered Trail to Frigid Seas
Author: Archet
Pairing: Viggo/Sean
Rating: PG
Summary: At first he’s met with only tolerant silence, but he keeps his words flowing into the silence, washing it away.
Disclaimer: this is fiction, for entertainment purposes only and in no way implies anything as to the real lives to the lovely men who are inspirations for these characters.
Feedback: welcomed and appreciated




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His voice is soft but intense, beseeching, as if he’s afraid that if he can’t be free of the words instantly he never will. At first he’s met with only tolerant silence, but he keeps his words flowing into the silence, washing it away. He maintains a steady stream, telling of all the foolish things he’s done that he would have undone, if able. He speaks a whispered trail of promises along the sweet curve of throat, pools another oath into the hollow just below.

He speaks of all the things he would do, if given the permission. A permission he once would not have sought, would not have even considered seeking, but things have changed, and it is of his doing. This vast, terrible silence is his doing, and so he presses his lips against soft blond hair, and just talks, explains, begs. By degrees the tolerance sheers off, and like glacier-ice suddenly cracks open, crashing into frigid seas, but even then he can’t stop.

He talks through it all, the sound and fury that is so much better than the silence, so much so that a generous part of him is happy to endure it. He holds fast and does not relent, does not release even when the struggle becomes near to violence. He endures, all the while keeping his words a steady tempo, at times pitching them the way he would to a wild untrusting creature, soft and gentle.

When the calm comes he is exhausted, but still holding on, still holding out his words, each one a plea, bearing the mark of his hope and his fear. The fingertips brushing over his lips are sudden and warm, no longer cool and distant. He trembles beneath their light touch, anoints them with more whisper-soft promises, sends trails of them down to collect into the smooth palm that cups his jaw.

“Viggo, for chrissakes, just shut up and kiss me.”

At last, he allows his words to cease so that the true, much longer, conversation may begin.

Date: 2009-02-23 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rifleman-s.livejournal.com
"He speaks a whispered trail of promises along the sweet curve of throat, pools another oath into the hollow just below."

I loved the contrast between the poetic nature of Viggo's approach and Sean's down to earth response!

Date: 2009-02-24 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archet.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this moment with them. Vig was determined to not to give up until he got something out of Sean. Thanks for reading!

Date: 2009-02-23 11:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alex-quine.livejournal.com
There's real urgency in the wall of words that describe your Viggo's pleading and there's bravery too...and then the down-to-earth single sentence of spoken dialogue that cuts through it all and signals the longed-for shift. A touching scene. thanks for posting.

Date: 2009-02-24 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archet.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. I really liked the idea of Viggo just keeping up a steady flow of words until he could get to that moment where Sean would accept him. I'm glad that came across. Thanks for your comments, :)

Date: 2009-02-23 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mooms.livejournal.com
This is so believable and so well done - Viggo pouring out a torrent of words until finally silenced by Sean's one line!

At last, he allows his words to cease so that the true, much longer, conversation may begin.

That last line is wonderful.


Date: 2009-02-24 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archet.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed this. I had the image of Vig just going, going, going until Sean just says 'enough already', I forgive you! *g* Thanks for reading.

Date: 2009-02-24 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eglvm.livejournal.com
Jesus, that was so beautiful. I have to 'memory' this. I could never write something so poetic. Well done.

Date: 2009-02-24 05:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archet.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I'm really happy that you enjoyed this enough to bookmark it. Thanks for reading!

Date: 2009-02-25 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liars-dance.livejournal.com
Playing a bit of overdue catch up on my f-list here - and what a wonderful piece to find! What your Viggo is doing is just so believable - so true to how I imagine him to be - as is Sean too - and the whole thing is just so beautifully written. Fabulous. I loved it! *applauds*

Date: 2009-02-27 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archet.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! I'm really pleased you felt them both to be believable and true to their character as you like to see them. Thanks for reading! ;)

Date: 2009-02-27 05:11 am (UTC)
msilverstar: (viggo bed)
From: [personal profile] msilverstar
he keeps his words flowing into the silence, washing it away.

This is fabulous, I like the way it tells what happened before only obliquely, and then the abrupt ending changes everything. Nice!

Date: 2009-02-27 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archet.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed this. I really liked the idea of Sean having just one line that changed the whole mood. Thanks for reading! ;)

Date: 2009-02-28 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com
Wow. That was quite breathtaking and beautiful. ♥

Date: 2009-02-28 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archet.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! I'm pleased you found this enjoyable, thanks for reading and your lovely comments. ;)
Edited Date: 2009-02-28 07:10 am (UTC)

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