Viggo/Sean=Drabble

[archet]

Sean wanted a turn, however brief...more sap,

Title: Endlessly Talking
Pairing: Viggo/Sean
Rating: PG13
Summary: Sometimes Sean doesn’t understand Viggo, other times he understands perfectly.
Disclaimer: this is fiction, implies nothing as to the real lives of the men who are inspirations for these characters.
Archive: my LJ, Rugbytackle
Feedback: welcomed and appreciated


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Sometimes he speaks to me and I don’t have a bloody clue what he’s on about. Get an idea in his head and he’s off, nattering on about something, usually a fucking mystery to me.

Sometimes he speaks to me and I understand exactly. He’s a way of letting me know, just whispers 'Sean' in that drawl he has and I’ll just give over whatever he wants to take.


Sometimes he speaks to me in a wordless language I’m just now learning where it’s his mouth on mine, his hands on me, endlessly talking.


I answer. “Love you too, Vig.”

Comments

[liars-dance.livejournal.com]

*SQUEE* Fabulous! You have Sean's voice absolutely right.

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I was worried a little about Sean's voice, I'm so glad to hear that it seemed to fit him, ;)

[bkm5191.livejournal.com]

lovely, just lovely

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much!

[darknightjess.livejournal.com]

Excellent.

Sounds like Sean perfectly!

[archet.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you! I wasn't sure if I had his voice down very well, glad to hear you thought it worked, ;)

[makamu]

Well, as everybody before me has pointed out, you nailed the voice :) But you also nailed the actions that are reflected in Sean's thoughts :)

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I really worked at getting Sean to 'sound' genuine. I'm so glad you liked, ;)

[ribby.livejournal.com]

*grin* Ah, the joys of learning a new language--go Sean!

Absolutely spot-on with Sean's voice, and his love for Viggo shines through so clearly (as does Viggo's love for him!). Wonderful!

~Kris

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I actually thought Sean's voice might've needed a little more tinkering, so I'm so happy you thought he sounded true to character, and that their love for one another shone through, thanks for reading! ;)

[archet.livejournal.com]

You did a brilliant job with the dialect!

Thank you! That's something I worry about more with him than with Viggo...

See, you'd be perfect for that job I mentioned. *begs*

I am so tempted, have been an inch away of talking myself into accepting. I think since it's unfamiliar ground I'm somewhat intimidated, that and for the last long while I've been trying to get my muses to work for me and not against me and now that they've just now begun cooperating I'm afraid of taking on something new...though even as I say that I'm thinking that if Sean's still open I'm going to give him a try. I'll know one way or the other this weekend, and I'll be sure to let you know, and if I don't please nag the hell out of me until it do, :)

your drabble

[halszka.livejournal.com]

I love your beatifull journal, wchich I opened whenever I can, to read something moving.
I must say that my favourite stories are about Elladan and Boromir.
Thank you for that fragile moment.

Re: your drabble

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much! I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed this, and that you've enjoyed my Elladan/Boromir fics. Have you read Soledad's stories? They are the inspiration for Elladan/Boromir, and my fics are a direct result of reading her works.

Thanks so much for letting me know you're enjoying some of my writings, ;)

[ladybluelove.livejournal.com]

AW! I love it...perfect! "-)~

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Glad to hear that you liked, ;)

[atanvarne-lj.livejournal.com]

Beautiful! Sean learning the language of love...what an awesome image. I needed this today. Thank you!

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this, and Sean learning the language of love was exactly what this was about, I'm so happy that shone through....hope you've had a better week, thanks for reading, ;)

[poutpout.livejournal.com]

awwwww.....

[archet.livejournal.com]

:D

[alexabond.livejournal.com]

Sweet!

[archet.livejournal.com]

Thanks! ;)