Each section is a shot of concentrated emotion and experience that is just perfect.
I like how you put that! That's exactly what a drabble is isn't it? I think that why I like them so.
And we feel the loss of both of them thought your writing. Bravo.
Thanks so much! That's wonderful to hear, as I very much wanted the loss to be shared by them both by the end. I'm glad you enjoyed, thanks for commenting! ;)
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Date: 2003-07-10 10:39 am (UTC)I like how you put that! That's exactly what a drabble is isn't it? I think that why I like them so.
And we feel the loss of both of them thought your writing. Bravo.
Thanks so much! That's wonderful to hear, as I very much wanted the loss to be shared by them both by the end. I'm glad you enjoyed, thanks for commenting! ;)