Thanks so much! I'm so glad you've enjoyed this, and that the emotion was carried to you so clearly. Those last line/s actually were going to read 'burn for me', 'return to me' as a repetition of the earlier drabble's 'return to me' but just as I went to post, I changed it. I'm glad the change seemed to work so well. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, and letting me know you enjoyed, ;)
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
momijizukamori
no subject
Date: 2011-07-25 08:55 pm (UTC)