Date: 2009-08-01 06:19 pm (UTC)
So much of this is so sad, in that unconscious, letting-it-slide way that you just want to whack them on their heads and ask them what they're thinking. But I do love how you bring them around at the end so that they're not only aware they're letting things fade, but that they're willing to take the steps to change that. A really lovely ending, tentative and worrisome, but shot through with hope. ♥
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