I think this piece is amazingly well-paced and very realistic because there are a few bigger bumbs in the road and they really both have to work through their issues which makes the resolution all the stronger.
What is more this piece was extremely visual and I could actually see them both there. Great job! :)
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Date: 2006-08-14 09:49 am (UTC)What is more this piece was extremely visual and I could actually see them both there. Great job! :)