Oh, this hurt so much, thankfully at the ending it did so in a good way, if that makes any sense. I really liked the "pacing" of this, the dialogue felt very real which, I suppose is a pretty difficult thing to pull off what with all the explaining they have to do. Great work, thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2006-08-14 08:41 am (UTC)