It really dawned on him, right then. Hee! Sorry, I couldn't resist... *hides* ;)
LOL! Yes, it really did didn't it? *g*
This is wonderful. You don't dwell inside their heads, yet what they're thinking, what they're feeling--all three of them--comes through so beautifully. I adore it! :D
You say the nicest things, ;) It makes me really happy that you saw clearly what all three were feeling. I started out aiming for A/B angst, but I ended up with happy!A/B. :D Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2004-03-23 11:59 am (UTC)LOL! Yes, it really did didn't it? *g*
This is wonderful. You don't dwell inside their heads, yet what they're thinking, what they're feeling--all three of them--comes through so beautifully. I adore it! :D
You say the nicest things, ;) It makes me really happy that you saw clearly what all three were feeling. I started out aiming for A/B angst, but I ended up with happy!A/B. :D Thanks for reading!
*hugs*