Oh, I appreciate this so much! Thank you for your wonderful, thoughtful feedback! It's always interesting to hear what someone else picked up on, I really don't plan my fics out in detail beforehand, and this series just happened from a sudden idea and just keeps expanding. I hadn't paid much attention to the sentence lengths, until you mentioned it.

Oddly, with each part the length doubles itself, so the fourth installment will probably prove the longest yet. Thank again for you lovely comments, and thank for reading! :)