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archet ([personal profile] archet) wrote2004-03-22 12:19 am
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A/B drabble

Title: Reflected Dawn
Author: Archet
Pairing: Aragorn/Boromir
Rating: PG
Summary: Legolas awaits the dawn.
Disclaimer: These characters don’t belong to me, nor did I create them. I only made the drabble.
Feedback: always appreciated



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The dawn lingered out of sight, secreted behind distant mountains, nearly ready to rise over soaring spires of ice and rock and spill its brilliance and warmth.

In the forest Legolas waited to witness the dawn, the moment where it would crown the trees with gold. It was then that he noticed them, the men, as they rose from the ground, fresh from sleep.

It happened quickly, but Legolas was watching, and so saw Aragorn lift Boromir’s hand and gently kiss his palm before walking away to rouse the hobbits.

Legolas saw the dawn then, reflected in Boromir’s brilliant smile.

[identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com 2004-03-21 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Legolas was watching? That naughty Elf!
But this was very sweet, once again.

[identity profile] liars-dance.livejournal.com 2004-03-22 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh... lovely drabble. And the images of mountain and light conjured up in so few words are incredible! Thanks so much for this.

[identity profile] whitewizzy.livejournal.com 2004-03-22 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely!
We'd all like to see that, can't really blame that elf. :)

[identity profile] dawning-star.livejournal.com 2004-03-22 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
Oh this is incredibly beautiful.

Legolas saw the dawn then, reflected in Boromir’s brilliant smile sums up the feeling of this so perfectly.
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[personal profile] makamu 2004-03-22 07:39 am (UTC)(link)
The Mirkwood Elves are a naughty lot! But your Legolas seems not to be one of the jealous kind, or so I feel at least. I loved the Elvishness and the keen observations of the keen-sighted Prince. *re-discovers her love and respect for well-treated Legolas*
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[identity profile] cinzia.livejournal.com 2004-03-22 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*happy sigh* Reading your drabbles always feel like reading poetry. :D Love it so much! The gentleness in Aragorn's gesture, the dawn reflected in Boromir's smile... *melts* And all seen through Legolas's eyes. It really dawned on him, right then. Hee! Sorry, I couldn't resist... *hides* ;)

This is wonderful. You don't dwell inside their heads, yet what they're thinking, what they're feeling--all three of them--comes through so beautifully. I adore it! :D

*hugs you tight*

[identity profile] zasjah.livejournal.com 2004-03-22 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is so utterly lovely.
This has put me in such a happy A/B mood. :-)
Thank you!

*off to dream happy A/B dreams*