ext_46175 ([identity profile] archet.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] archet 2004-03-23 11:59 am (UTC)

It really dawned on him, right then. Hee! Sorry, I couldn't resist... *hides* ;)

LOL! Yes, it really did didn't it? *g*

This is wonderful. You don't dwell inside their heads, yet what they're thinking, what they're feeling--all three of them--comes through so beautifully. I adore it! :D

You say the nicest things, ;) It makes me really happy that you saw clearly what all three were feeling. I started out aiming for A/B angst, but I ended up with happy!A/B. :D Thanks for reading!

*hugs*


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