ext_5876 ([identity profile] alex-quine.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] archet 2011-11-10 11:53 pm (UTC)

Your Aragorn has been so strong, has portrayed himself as strong, although the last lines of the preceding piece hint at what this has cost him and here, at last, he breaks, with joy, perhaps with terror at what has been so narrowly avoided and also because he can now that his beacon has returned to him. A fitting end to the build in intensity and tension. grand.

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