ext_5876 ([identity profile] alex-quine.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] archet 2007-06-28 11:09 pm (UTC)

The minimal dialogue supports the rhythm of this scene, with the general description of your Viggo's speech one long mass into which Sean only interjects after sufficient time has passed...also the final two words from Viggo neatly show him doing the same by Sean, recognising the unspoken dialogue and responding. Thanks for posting.

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