I really liked this: the slow gentle banter that seemed to fit both of them, these lines:
Like so much between them, it’d just happened, and only afterwards did it occur to Vig to wonder when and how. Quite a few things in his home belonged to Sean now, the pillow, the left side of the bed, three drawers of his dresser and a good third of his closet, the hammock out by the patio under the big oak . . . and several other things that had never belonged to anyone, except Viggo.
to illustrate how far the relationship has progressed already without their noticing and the current of unconscious commitment underneath it all. And stylistically speaking, you nailed both their voices :)
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Like so much between them, it’d just happened, and only afterwards did it occur to Vig to wonder when and how. Quite a few things in his home belonged to Sean now, the pillow, the left side of the bed, three drawers of his dresser and a good third of his closet, the hammock out by the patio under the big oak . . . and several other things that had never belonged to anyone, except Viggo.
to illustrate how far the relationship has progressed already without their noticing and the current of unconscious commitment underneath it all. And stylistically speaking, you nailed both their voices :)