ext_47047 ([identity profile] elintirn.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] archet 2006-08-23 06:29 am (UTC)

I loved how this slipped from the playful banter mask to the real issue at hand so effortlessly. You showed Sean's insecurity and worry really well, with all the little twitches and the way he speaks.

A really lovely mixture of tenderness and humour and hotness(er, heat)!

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