Drabble

[archet]

Title: Restless Breath
Author: Archet
Pairing: really can be either Viggo/Sean or Aragorn/Boromir
Rating: PG
Summary: You speak to me wordlessly as I watch you move past, hand on the hilt of your sword.
Disclaimer: this is fiction. Lies. Untruths.
Feedback: please do, welcomed and appreciated
Archive: My LJ, Rugbytackle

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You speak to me wordlessly as I watch you move past, hand on the hilt of your sword. I hear anger in your stride, in the way you won’t meet my eyes. I hear all the things I wouldn’t let you say, when you so bravely offered me your heart.


You pass, extending neither look nor greeting, a brave vision in leather and velvet, and you’re speaking to me. I hear the hurt rolling off you and I die, breath by restless breath, in knowing I am the one.


I caused this silent voicing.


I die, breath by restless breath.

Comments

[rinsbane.livejournal.com]

I like how this can be read on both levels. I did both, and am not sure which I prefer.

Love your icon, btw.

[ribby.livejournal.com]

Gorgeous! I think, because that's where my head is right now, this works for me as Aragorn/Boromir--but I can see Viggo/Sean as well.

And that last line is wonderful--so sad, though!

~Kris

[zasjah.livejournal.com]

*wails*

This is so perfect, so sad, on /all/ levels.

[halszka.livejournal.com]

Your wonderful drabble's (?) are like poetry. Short and full of expression, and you are writing them one by one, equally good.
Thank you.

[cruisedirector]

...definitely A/B in my book. The other two talk. *g*

[poutpout.livejournal.com]

in knowing I am the one
simply beautiful!!!