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archet ([personal profile] archet) wrote2005-04-24 09:36 pm

Drabble

Title: Restless Breath
Author: Archet
Pairing: really can be either Viggo/Sean or Aragorn/Boromir
Rating: PG
Summary: You speak to me wordlessly as I watch you move past, hand on the hilt of your sword.
Disclaimer: this is fiction. Lies. Untruths.
Feedback: please do, welcomed and appreciated
Archive: My LJ, Rugbytackle

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You speak to me wordlessly as I watch you move past, hand on the hilt of your sword. I hear anger in your stride, in the way you won’t meet my eyes. I hear all the things I wouldn’t let you say, when you so bravely offered me your heart.


You pass, extending neither look nor greeting, a brave vision in leather and velvet, and you’re speaking to me. I hear the hurt rolling off you and I die, breath by restless breath, in knowing I am the one.


I caused this silent voicing.


I die, breath by restless breath.

[identity profile] halszka.livejournal.com 2005-04-26 03:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Your wonderful drabble's (?) are like poetry. Short and full of expression, and you are writing them one by one, equally good.
Thank you.

[identity profile] archet.livejournal.com 2005-04-26 09:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying them, thanks for letting me know, ;)