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archet ([personal profile] archet) wrote2004-03-22 12:19 am
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A/B drabble

Title: Reflected Dawn
Author: Archet
Pairing: Aragorn/Boromir
Rating: PG
Summary: Legolas awaits the dawn.
Disclaimer: These characters don’t belong to me, nor did I create them. I only made the drabble.
Feedback: always appreciated



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The dawn lingered out of sight, secreted behind distant mountains, nearly ready to rise over soaring spires of ice and rock and spill its brilliance and warmth.

In the forest Legolas waited to witness the dawn, the moment where it would crown the trees with gold. It was then that he noticed them, the men, as they rose from the ground, fresh from sleep.

It happened quickly, but Legolas was watching, and so saw Aragorn lift Boromir’s hand and gently kiss his palm before walking away to rouse the hobbits.

Legolas saw the dawn then, reflected in Boromir’s brilliant smile.

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[identity profile] cinzia.livejournal.com 2004-03-22 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*happy sigh* Reading your drabbles always feel like reading poetry. :D Love it so much! The gentleness in Aragorn's gesture, the dawn reflected in Boromir's smile... *melts* And all seen through Legolas's eyes. It really dawned on him, right then. Hee! Sorry, I couldn't resist... *hides* ;)

This is wonderful. You don't dwell inside their heads, yet what they're thinking, what they're feeling--all three of them--comes through so beautifully. I adore it! :D

*hugs you tight*

[identity profile] archet.livejournal.com 2004-03-23 11:59 am (UTC)(link)
It really dawned on him, right then. Hee! Sorry, I couldn't resist... *hides* ;)

LOL! Yes, it really did didn't it? *g*

This is wonderful. You don't dwell inside their heads, yet what they're thinking, what they're feeling--all three of them--comes through so beautifully. I adore it! :D

You say the nicest things, ;) It makes me really happy that you saw clearly what all three were feeling. I started out aiming for A/B angst, but I ended up with happy!A/B. :D Thanks for reading!

*hugs*